Today I was learning ; how the water cycle works
I enjoyed ; researching about this topic
I found it challenging to ; it was kinda easy
My digital learning object shows ; i dunno T-T
Next time I would change ; the edits and forming
Thursday 1 August 2019
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Hi River I am Nevaeh from Te Hapara School. I like your attention to detail in your piece of writing. Next time I think you should double check your work before you post it. I noticed that on top of your work you made a error in your typing.
ReplyDeleteHI river I am Jerome from mangapapa school I am a year 6 student I really liked your writing and your ditail next time I think you should check your learning before you post .
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